I realized madeline was a creepy book a few weeks ago. funny how i didn't notice when i was little. There is this one where they find a stray dog that is particularly morbid... cant wait to see more!!!! :)
I like how Freddy was reading this. I noticed he was staring at one page and he put his claw up to it. Uh Freddy are you okay? Huh yeah. THAT DOESN'T RHYME! My dad used to read me stories and then make up a few parts to be funny. Freddy is kind of doing the same thing. I didn't think Freddy could pull off French accent. Freddy Will see you in hell.
...The voice was wrong, and stick to one project at a time, don't start off fifteen projects and only stick to 4... (I'm not gonna say anything about the face, cause not many people can actually duplicate Kreuger's face...
im gunna be honest, not your best work. I liked certain parts, but just those parts. I mean it felt like you could have condensed this into a 3 minute cideo and it would have been hilarious.
Now im no film super hilarious guy. But hose are my two cents, But know this. In all your projects you get better with time. so an episode or two down the block i think this could be somthing special.
Normally I WOULD NEVER, EVER ask this, but I happen to make a show in a similar vein and was wondering if a one of cameo would be possible (totally understand if you're too busy with other projects though.) Click my name to go to the page to see what you'd be getting yourself into.
This was pretty cool, I'd like to see what you're going to do with this.
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ReplyDeleteFreddy voice was dead on
ReplyDeletelet me adress you to this little video.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ob37KzlUEPA
thought of this the whole time through.
good job, very good.
The joke was too extended and got a little old after a while. It needs more variance in terms of the humor too.
ReplyDeleteThat doesn't rhyme...THAT DOESN'T RHYME!!
ReplyDeleteFreddy stick to the script. YOU GOTTA SLEEP SOMETIME!
Sound really close to your vegeta there at the end, might want to work on that. Good though looking forward to seeing more.
ReplyDeleteso wait are you going to be doing more of these? you are fuckin' amazing, man
ReplyDeleteThat was great, and I can remember reading that book when I was little.
ReplyDeleteI realized madeline was a creepy book a few weeks ago. funny how i didn't notice when i was little. There is this one where they find a stray dog that is particularly morbid... cant wait to see more!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteMan I want Lani Kruger in my dreams!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like how Freddy was reading this. I noticed he was staring at one page and he put his claw up to it. Uh Freddy are you okay? Huh yeah. THAT DOESN'T RHYME! My dad used to read me stories and then make up a few parts to be funny. Freddy is kind of doing the same thing. I didn't think Freddy could pull off French accent. Freddy Will see you in hell.
ReplyDeleteAwesome stuff I can't wait to see more, it'll improve over time guys.
ReplyDeleteAlso another outside the otaku would be nice.
I have to say this was hit and miss Lani.
ReplyDeleteThe Freddy look doesn't quite work without the sweater. It's a small thing, but that kept distracting me.
It dragged in parts. Maybe add some music over the reading, change up the camera angles a little bit.
Otherwise the voice is awesome and it's a fun idea. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
this voice is just one step off from being cookie monster. but funny non the less.
ReplyDelete...The voice was wrong, and stick to one project at a time, don't start off fifteen projects and only stick to 4...
ReplyDelete(I'm not gonna say anything about the face, cause not many people can actually duplicate Kreuger's face...
Everyone here's a kiss-ass, by the way...
ReplyDeleteim gunna be honest, not your best work. I liked certain parts, but just those parts. I mean it felt like you could have condensed this into a 3 minute cideo and it would have been hilarious.
ReplyDeleteNow im no film super hilarious guy. But hose are my two cents, But know this. In all your projects you get better with time. so an episode or two down the block i think this could be somthing special.
also i cant spell
ReplyDeleteFucking creepy dude not going to lie.
ReplyDeleteIt was funny, but I agree with some people about it dragging along a bit. And you put "staring" instead of "starring". But a typo's a typo.
ReplyDeleteReally good episode man. Would love to see more of these.
ReplyDeleteP.S. One thing though, if you can get one, you really need the stripped shirt.
Normally I WOULD NEVER, EVER ask this, but I happen to make a show in a similar vein and was wondering if a one of cameo would be possible (totally understand if you're too busy with other projects though.) Click my name to go to the page to see what you'd be getting yourself into.
ReplyDeleteSeriously dude, quit while you're ahead...TGWTG only accepted cause you happen to be a part of TFS...
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